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flounder face
Nov 18th, 2012quote
Not enough expression to the face. It seems too perfectly positioned for the design, which looks kind of scruffy. A tilt of the head and a lowered eyelid would serve this camera angle pretty well.

Unless the hand on his chin is actually the back of his collar, and his neck is really VERY SCRAWNY.

GJ tho
Nov 22nd, 2012quote
quote:
Not enough expression to the face. It seems too perfectly positioned for the design, which looks kind of scruffy. A tilt of the head and a lowered eyelid would serve this camera angle pretty well.

Unless the hand on his chin is actually the back of his collar, and his neck is really VERY SCRAWNY.

GJ tho

Critique very much appreciated, Thank you.
Nov 23rd, 2012 [OP]quote
And yes the hand was the collar.
Nov 23rd, 2012 [OP]quote




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